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Monday, 26 September 2011

Through the tunnel

 THROUGH THE TUNNEL SHORT STORY
SETTING:
It take place in the holiday during the summer time at the shore of a foreigner country.

PLOT:
Jerry an English boy went to a holiday at the shore. Jerry's mother is a widow and is sometimes overprotective, sometimes not protective enough, of her son.The beach was in a foreign country and everyone there don't mind about foreigners.Jerry attempts to make friends with some older boys on the beach, but they ignore him after discovering he is childish.   He begins to persistently practice holding his breath so that he too may swim through the rock.He started training for a fast swimming like the big boys and he manage staying under water for few minute .He is determined to be able to hold his breath for a sufficient time so he can accomplishes
this feat.For Jerry, without a father and rapidly approaching adulthood, this challenge Jerry in his life.At last he was a good swimmer and he enjoy the holiday at the foreigner country.


MAIN CHARACTER:

JERRY(English boy)
He was eleven years old.
He went to a vacation at the beach with her mother.
He try to make friends with boys at the beach but they ignore him.
He was jealous with the guys 's swimming skills and wanted to do as them.
He train hard and become a good swimmer.


1 comment:

  1. Poor grammer , use of text message not allowed in academic writting. Please pay attention to tense . 4/10

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